Our new literacy topic is
‘Stories with mythical creatures or events’.
This week we have been learning
the story of Brave Rowland.
For your homework this week write the first two
chapters of the story in your own words – use the story map to remind you.
Remember to include:
- Capital letters and full stops
- Adverbs including fronted adverbials eg. cautiously, early one morning, quietly
- Speech using speech marks " "
- Description using adjectives eg. beautiful, sorrowful, youngest
Long Ago, lived a Queen With three Princes And a Princess called Lady Ellen. One evening the three Princes and Lady Ellen were playing with their beautiful, Sparkly, Shiny Golden Ball and Brave Rowland threw the ball over the church of ran Lady Ellen with all the Princes except Brave Rowland After many days there still was no return the Queen started to get worried.
ReplyDeleteBrave Rowland Begged his Mother if he could go but she said no because if you get lost then ill have no more children so you can't and that's that but said Brave Rowland and Brave Rowland kept on begging the Queen closed her eyes as she did not want him to go but she said okay and gave him his fathers sword and put enchantment on it and then set of Brave Rowland for an adventure.
CHAPTER ONE
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there were three Princes and two Princesses.
Early one morning they found a magical ball on their doorstep, it was so shiny, "it is so exciting!" the Princes said,they were very happy and they played in the back garden with it.
One of the Princess kicked it so hard that it flew over the castle, it went through the forest andit landed at the Warlock house.
The chief Warlock was in the house and he jumped, a ball just came through one of his window!
"what is this ball?" he said, " it looks like a tomato!"
One of the Princesses went to her mother and said "mother we found a magical ball!it's spectacular! we kicked it,it flew over the Church and through the forest of spookiness and I don't know where it landed!"
One of the Prince said "I think it's in the Warlock House!"
The Warlock decided to go around the Kingdom with the strange looking ball through the forest of scariness.
he went past the Village, the market, the Church and the bushes, finally he reached a island and he left the ball there.
strangely the ball disappeared....
CHAPTERER 2
The Princesses went West in search for the magical ball, they found themselves at the Warlock House.
They knocked at the door but no one was answering,a ghost appeared like a chita , they were so scared and the ghostwas dragging them to the back of the house.
They went to a secret chamber and the ghost put them in the dungeon.
The dungeon had two skeleton bodies and witches heads.it was horrible and so bloody.
the two princes went toghetr to the same place to rescue them,unfortunately they have been catched as well!
There was one Prince left and he was the Prince who was going to save them all bravely.
His name was Mark, he said to his mother "I must go to rescue them,they are in danger!"
The mother was fine with it but first she had to give him an important thing, a wonderful sword from his father.
The Queen said a spell called "Legendry and Victory" and then he set off on his horse.
Once upon a time there lived a queen in the crystal palace in crystal ham. She had three brave princes and a magnificent princess named lady Ellen.one fine evening three princes and Lady Ellen were playing with the golden ball in the garden. While playing one of the princes kicked ball over the church roof. Lady Ellen ran off to pick the ball but she did not return. After a long wait queen summoned her oldest son asked him to go in search of Ellen. The oldest prince asked the help of chief warlock to find Lady Ellen through the enchanted forest. Lady Ellen was abducted by elf king of elf land.
ReplyDeleteThe queen and the others were waiting for the eldest son to return but he did not, so second prince went to find his siblings but he also did not return.as the days went queen was worried and upset. One day the youngest son named brave Rowland asked the queen to grant him permission to search his siblings, but the queen worried to send brave Rowland. He begged the queen. The queen closed her eyes and gave him permission unwillingly. The queen gave Rowland the sword of his father and said “this sword never struck in vain”. Brave Rowland leaves the palace and gets help of chief warlock. Rowland asked chief warlock to how to rescue Lady Ellen and my brothers. Chef warlock said to remember two things. 1. After talking to a person you cut off their head.2. You are not allowed to eat or drink your journey. If you don’t remember this you will not return home.
More than one hundred years ago, there lived three princes and one princess named Lady Ellen. One dark evening they were outside, playing with their golden, shiney ball. One of the princes kicked the ball too high and it went over the church tower. Then Lady Ellen said,"I'll get it." She went behind the church tower to get it...after a while she did not come back! So off the three princes ran to find her. One of the princes went to the Queen (their mum) and said,"Lady Ellen is lost" One of the princes went to find her.
ReplyDeleteHe went to Chief Warlock and asked,"Were is Lady Ellen?" Chief Warlock said,"She's in the mountains in Ellf land in the dark tower...OH YEH...youl even meat some animal cares you can ask them do you know the way...?" "So they might know the way and what to do...and you might find her good luck." "I'll even give you this sword and if anyone talks to you then chop of there heads!"
One beautiful day, about hundreds years ago in a little village lived three boys and their pretty sister, Brave Rowland, Prince George, Prince Alan and Lady Emily. They were very happy and active. They were often playing outside the house. This time the siblings played football and kicked the ball over the neigbour's house into the deep dark forest.
ReplyDeleteThey decided to go for a little walk to find their favourite ball. Brave Rowland said to his brothers and sister:" Let's go to find it now before the supper, otherwise mom can be nervous and worried." Then Lady Emily was left behind to tie her shoe, after that brothers realized their sister went missing ! They all thought it had to be the ugly giant who was taking people away and putting them in the deep magical sleep...
Brave Rowland
ReplyDeleteLong ago,lived a queen with her three brave sons and one elegant daughter. One evening,brave Rowland and Lady elen with their brothers were playing with the golden ball. Accidently princess Elen threw the ball over the church, so she went looking for it. Lady Elen was gone for more than a day. Brave Rowland and their brothers looked for her east and west but didn't found her.
So they went and nealed before the Queen and begged if the oldest brother could go searching for lady Elen. The brother went and asked the Worlock for advice, the Worlock said :"there are two things you must do, the thing that you must do is that you must cut off people's head if they talk to you. As well, the thing that you must not do it is that you must not eat or drink in elf land or you will never return home again.
The Worlock also told him that the elf king took lady Elen. So brave Rowland set to the palace and nealed before the Queen and said :"I need to go again", so she gave him a magic gleaming sword with a ruby attached to the Handle,that never struck in vein. Brave Rowland set on the journey to find his brother and Lady elen.
By selien
Brave Rowland
ReplyDeleteLong ago there was a Queen. She had 3 sons and 1 daughter called Lady Ellen. One day, the sons were playing with their golden ball when Brave Rowland threw the ball over the church. So, Lady Ellen went to get it. She did not come back. The brothers reached west and east but still could not find her. The oldest brother went to Chief Warlock’s house.
The Chief trained him and he went to find Lady Ellen but did not return back. The second oldest brother did the same and did not return either. After a few days, Brave Rowland kneeled down to the Queen and begged her if he could rescue Lady Ellen. She gave him permission. She gave him a sword and enchanted a spell to make it win.
So, Brave Rowland went to the forest deeper and deeper. At the deepest part, he saw a small hut. In front of him, there was the Chief. He said, “There are two things: one you must do and the other you must not. If anyone talks to you, you must chop their head and you must not eat or never see your home again”. Brave Rowland went to the tower.
Brave Rowland
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a queen who had two sons and a daughter